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In 3.1 Setting Serialization Parameters by Means of a Data Model Instance, the text: "with the supplied instance of the data model as the context item, the param-name variable having as its value a value of type xs:string equal to the local part of the name of the particular serialization parameter, ..." seemed a little awkward. Perhaps one of the following would suffice? "with the supplied instance of the data model as the context item, the param-name variable bound to a value of type xs:string equal to the local part of the name of the particular serialization parameter, ..." or "with the supplied instance of the data model as the context item, a value of type xs:string equal to the local part of the name of the particular serialization parameter as the param-name variable, ..."
I went with your first suggestion. Thanks.