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Current text: ]] Obviously, it is important that access to the long description is accessible to users. Further information on how to do this can be found in [UAAG]. [[ It is unclear what the above paragraph says: * An "access" that "is accessible" sounds like it is about about an "accessible URL". * The text uses the wording "long description", see bug 22187. * (The word "obviously" sounds a bit like a weaselword.) Attempt of improved text: ]] USER AGENT access to INDEPENDENT descriptionS ALSO HAS TO BE accessible to THE users OF THE USER AGENT. Further information on how to do this can be found in [UAAG]. [[
Agree that the wording is not very nice, but I don't like yours either :) I'll do something about it...
(In reply to comment #1) > Agree that the wording is not very nice, but I don't like yours either :) Agree. Don't like it myself. > I'll do something about it... Good.
Text added to editor's draft that will be published today...