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Bug 1539 - [FS] editorial: 2.4.3 Content models
Summary: [FS] editorial: 2.4.3 Content models
Status: CLOSED FIXED
Alias: None
Product: XPath / XQuery / XSLT
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Formal Semantics 1.0 (show other bugs)
Version: Last Call drafts
Hardware: All All
: P2 minor
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Jerome Simeon
QA Contact: Mailing list for public feedback on specs from XSL and XML Query WGs
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Reported: 2005-07-10 08:06 UTC by Michael Dyck
Modified: 2005-09-29 14:30 UTC (History)
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Description Michael Dyck 2005-07-10 08:06:34 UTC
2.4.3 Content models

[25 (Formal)] Occurrence ::= "*" | "+" | "?"
    It would be simpler to just use OccurrenceIndicator.

"but it more general has it applies to arbitrary types"
    Insert "is" before "more"
    Change "has" to "as".

"Where the interleaving of two sequences of items ..."
    This is not a sentence.
    s/. Where/, where/  or  s/Where the/The/

para 4 & 5 (Both beginning with 'The "&" operator')
    There's a lot of overlap between these two paragraphs.

"Types precedence order: Associativity"
    As far as I can tell, all three binary operators are associative, i.e.
        (A op B) op C = A op (B op C)
    so there's no need to define their associativity.
    And associativity of unary operators is meaningless.