From: Ronald.Tschalaer@psi.ch (Life is
hard... and then you die.)
Date: Tue, 17 Mar 1998 18:25:28 +0200
To: JG@pa.dec.com
Subject: minor corrections to draft-ietf-http-v11-spec-rev-03.txt
Hi Jim,
here are a few (mostly) minor typos in
draft-ietf-http-v11-spec-rev-03.txt.
Section 8.1.4, lines 2417 and 2419:
...
without user interaction so long as the request sequence is
idempotent
(see section 9.1.2);.Non-idempotent methods or sequences
MUST NOT be
^^^
automatically retried, although user agents MAY offer a
human operator
the choice of retrying the request(s).The automatic retry
SHOULD NOT be
^^
Section 9.1.2, line 2680:
However, it is possible that a sequence of several requests
is non-
idempotent, even if all of the methods executed in that
sequence is
^^
idempotent. (A sequence is idempotent if a single execution
of the
"is" should be "are"
Section 14.3, line 5258, is still not right:
Accept-Encoding:
gzip;q=1.0, identity; q=0.5; *;q=0
^
should be
Accept-Encoding:
gzip;q=1.0, identity; q=0.5, *;q=0
Section 14.9.2, line 5645:
...
mechanism for ensuring privacy. In particular, malicious or
compromised
caches may not recognize or obey this directive; and
communications
^
networks may be vulnerable to eavesdropping.
the ";" ought to be a ",", I believe
Section 14.36, line 7160:
If the field value is a partial URI, it SHOULD be
interpreted relative
to the Request-URI. The URI MUST NOT include a fragment.See
section
^^
Section 19.6, line 8706:
persistent connections described in section Error!
Reference source not
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
found..
^^^^^^
Section 19.7.1, line 9066:
"identity" (section 3.6.2), "gzip" (section 3.4.1),
"compress" (section
3.4.1), and "deflate" (section 3.4.1).The registry should
note that
^^
Section 20 (Index), line 9438:
Tim Berners.Lee,
137
rules on use of, 75
^
should be
Tim Berners-Lee,
137
rules on use of, 75
Cheers,
Ronald