<kaz> latest draft
<McCool> McCool: "today products" should be "today's products"
<McCool> ... or "products today"
<McCool> McCool: but we can do a typo pass at the end...
<inserted> scribenick: Ege
Coralie: we can have a quote, not
mandatory though
... it should be generic though
Lagally: a comment from a neutral person would be nice, like Jeff Jaffe
Sebastian: I second that
Coralie: I will bring that
<McCool> McCool: another typo: Mozilla WebThing should be "Mozilla WebThings" - I just checked on their site also
Coralie: I think there should be changed made to the last sentence of paragraph 1
McCool+Sebastian: I would second that
McCool: the title should be changed and also it should be Mozilla WebThings, with an s
<koalie> "including proofs of concept for smart cities and retail projects"
<koalie> "including proofs of concept for Smart Dities and Retail projects"
<koalie> "including proof of concept projects for Smart Dities and Retail"
<McCool> McCool: including proof of concept projects for Smart City and Retail
Coralie: (discussing the existing product paragraph)
Daniel: there should be no dot between thingweb and node-wot
<sebastian> change "Eclipse Thingweb.node-wot" to "Eclipse Thingweb node-wot"
<kaz> Node.js site
<kaz> we should mention Node.js as well here, and the spelling is "Node.js" as their site says
<McCool> McCool: (in Node.js)
<sebastian> change "... reference implementation... " to "... reference implementation (in Node.js)..."
<kaz> McCool suggests we use a spell checker to avoid typos later
<kaz> spell checker
<sebastian> move "Further WoT runtime implementations are WoTPy (in Python) and SANE Web of Things Servient (in Java);" to the end of the list
Sebastian: I wrote to someone who is
managing the Mozilla implementation, to ask them to give a
testimonial
... but the timing is not criticial, we can add them last
minute
Ege: it is a bit unusual to see Singapore
McCool: it is more punchy this way and it is not really false
RESOLUTION: NOT change it to Govtech Singapore
<koalie> https://w3c.github.io/wot-marketing/pressrelease-wot-rec.html
<koalie> (^^ reload)
Sebastian: so the press release is finalized!
<koalie> [Coralie departs]
Sebastian: there is a project on thing
directory run by Frauenhofer
... called Link Smart
... maybe we can invite them to a call
... they have a thing directory, a bit different than our
solution for the plugfests
McCool: yes let's invite them
Sebastian: (shows the slides shown by
Christian Glomb)
... The idea is to make a video that follows the scenario of
these slides
... any volunteers to sponsor?
McCool: I have left over budget
... any estimates?
Sebastian: (shows fiverr.com) can be for 150$
Kaz: Generally marcom generates
these resources
... we should consult them
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Thing_Description#/media/File:ThingDescription_Logo.png
McCool: I would like to see wot marketing and branding
Ege: Here is a prototype
Kaz: we have to talk with marcom about this as well. so I'd suggest we clarify all our points for marketing which possibly require MarComm Team's confiration/collaboration
McCool: for the video, we should have a script and thus estimation for the word count and time
https://github.com/w3c/wot-marketing/issues/52
McCool: ege also has an issue about developer outreach
Sebastian: please comment on the issue
<kaz> prev minutes
scribenick: kaz
Sebastian: should review them next week given the time
Kaz: ok
[adjourned]