[Odrl-version2] Common Vocabulary Update: 18 FEB 2011

[Myles, Stuart]

Hi Renato,

Most of the changes look good to me.

A picky detail point is that many of the definitions are a bit
self-referential, such as

append The act of appending to the asset
read The act of reading the asset

Maybe "append" could be defined as "To add to the end of an asset" and
"read" as "to obtain data from the asset" (which I think is the intent,
since the Comment for "read" is "For example, the ability to read a
record from a database (the asset)").

I realize it would be a bit of work to go through and clean this up, but
it might be worthwhile? Maybe, if people agree, the work be divvied up
somewhat?

Regards,

Stuart



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Hi all - I am pleased to release the latest update to the ODRL V2.0
Common Vocabulary:

  http://odrl.net/2.0/WD-ODRL-Vocab-20110218.html

The document indicates the (colour-coded) changes.

Please send in any comments and feedback...

Cheers

Renato Iannella
ODRL Initiative
http://odrl.net



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